The clip is much better and the addition of having him turning the piece of
paper around works really well, nicely done!
One last thing that sticks out to me is his upper body area starting around x51.
It moves screen right until x55 and then stops very suddenly, as if it's hitting
a wall. After that you have it drop very quickly from x59 to 61 and you can see
how the head is not moving screen left anymore either until around x66. It looks
like the whole body is pivoting through the head, since it's stuck there in
space.
I would definitely work on that area a bit more before moving on. Almost there!
Cheers
JD
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