Friday, May 14, 2010

Joseph Taylor - Pregnant - Critique

​Great clip!

Little technical things:

- watch his screen right wrist on x121, it pops up.

- his pinky on the screen right hand starts drifting early around x155

- try to move the wrist translation a bit when the screen left elbow moves out to the left around x108. The elbow is doing a huge move but the wrist is just locked. The elbow also dips down around x118

- when she rests her hand on x63, the hand feels a bit light, the feeling of her hand contacting his shoulder is a bit light. And when he leans over around x71 to the left until around x77 the hand could follow that shoulder a bit more in order to make that contact a bit more solid.

Love it otherwise!

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