Friday, May 14, 2010
Joseph Taylor - Reel - Feedback
I like the reel a lot!
Keep the maid, that one cracks me up, especially her walk out!
Keep the mom, that one is great!! Definitely work on it, some stuff on the baby,
but it's pretty far along though.
Not too sure about the hitchhiker, that clip doesn't feel as strong as the rest.
Especially his walk off at the beginning feels off balance and a bit
But I like the physicality of it. Besides the red-light-guy, your characters are
either sitting or standing behind and object (like the maid). So I would focus
on something where you can clearly see someone walking and something more
physical for weight.